Things to add to Second Draft (of my novel) November 11, 2005 – Posted in: Aberrant Normalcy
• More Weirdness!
• More of Blake’s past!
• More storefronts and hawkers!
• More crazy looking aliens!
• More technology!
• More class difference!
• The Psychic Fields under the city!
• Los Tao’s multiple personality disorder!
etc.