Things to add to Second Draft (of my novel) November 11, 2005 – Posted in: Aberrant Normalcy

• More Weirdness!

• More of Blake’s past!

• More storefronts and hawkers!

• More crazy looking aliens!

• More technology!

• More class difference!

• The Psychic Fields under the city!

• Los Tao’s multiple personality disorder!

etc.