Comments on: The Fluid Howl http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/ "How do you know but ev’ry Bird that cuts the airy way is an immense world of delight, clos’d by your senses five?" - William Blake Tue, 06 Jan 2009 09:15:38 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: Eugene Reynolds http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5472 Eugene Reynolds Sun, 10 Sep 2006 00:20:07 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5472 I know it's a week late, but it was a holiday weekend and I worked two hours in the pouring rain at a farmers' market. So please forgive me for just now catching up. Really enjoyed your appearance on "Hour of the Wolf" and the critiquing of Kris's story. To add my own random thought, I ditto the comment on the story needing conflict, but I'd like to propose that rather than external (girl vs. magician), it be internal. After all, kids who are outcast know *exactly* who to blame for their condition - themselves. So, she hates herself, and our flea circus impresario must show (not tell - kids are thorough story editors) her how to like herself. Just a thought, and Kris can relate how I edit NYRSF pieces, so she can tell that I have shields down and phasers disarmed. :) - Eugene, the other one ... I know it’s a week late, but it was a holiday weekend and I worked two hours in the pouring rain at a farmers’ market. So please forgive me for just now catching up. Really enjoyed your appearance on “Hour of the Wolf” and the critiquing of Kris’s story. To add my own random thought, I ditto the comment on the story needing conflict, but I’d like to propose that rather than external (girl vs. magician), it be internal. After all, kids who are outcast know *exactly* who to blame for their condition - themselves. So, she hates herself, and our flea circus impresario must show (not tell - kids are thorough story editors) her how to like herself. Just a thought, and Kris can relate how I edit NYRSF pieces, so she can tell that I have shields down and phasers disarmed. :)

- Eugene, the other one …

]]> By: Matthew Kressel http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5285 Matthew Kressel Sun, 03 Sep 2006 20:57:37 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5285 Next time, Lauren will play keyboard and I will play guitar as backing music to the story while it is read... Next time, Lauren will play keyboard and I will play guitar as backing music to the story while it is read…

]]> By: Lauren http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5284 Lauren Sun, 03 Sep 2006 20:31:48 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5284 You're all nuts. You sound great and so did I. We rock. You’re all nuts. You sound great and so did I. We rock.

]]> By: Mercurio D. Rivera http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5281 Mercurio D. Rivera Sun, 03 Sep 2006 14:42:09 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5281 No, no, no. I was the incoherent guy with marbles in his mouth who sat too far away from the microphone. But the rest of you sounded extremely eloquent! No, no, no. I was the incoherent guy with marbles in his mouth who sat too far away from the microphone. But the rest of you sounded extremely eloquent!

]]> By: Matthew Kressel http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5280 Matthew Kressel Sun, 03 Sep 2006 14:19:00 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5280 You sounded fine Devin. Your mildly Mid-Western/Southern twang is quite charming and adds color to the group... And Kris, you sounded great! My LI accent on the other hand... You sounded fine Devin. Your mildly Mid-Western/Southern twang is quite charming and adds color to the group…

And Kris, you sounded great!

My LI accent on the other hand…

]]> By: Devin http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5279 Devin Sun, 03 Sep 2006 13:51:34 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5279 You sounded great Kris. I, on the other hand... Ugh. If we get around to doing one of my stories on air, I believe I'll hire some pro voice talent to read for me. -Devin You sounded great Kris. I, on the other hand… Ugh. If we get around to doing one of my stories on air, I believe I’ll hire some pro voice talent to read for me.

-Devin

]]> By: Kris http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5271 Kris Sun, 03 Sep 2006 03:36:22 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5271 are you kidding? you all told me I sounded like Brenda Vacarro. I just listened -- I'm like a chipmunk on helium. But I did appreciate the great crits, and it was pretty cool sitting around just shooting the breeze on the air with Jim. are you kidding? you all told me I sounded like Brenda Vacarro. I just listened — I’m like a chipmunk on helium.

But I did appreciate the great crits, and it was pretty cool sitting around just shooting the breeze on the air with Jim.

]]> By: Mercurio D. Rivera http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5268 Mercurio D. Rivera Sat, 02 Sep 2006 23:50:37 +0000 http://www.sensesfive.com/blog/2006/09/02/the-fluid-howl/#comment-5268 It was great sharing this adventure with you and the rest of AlteredFluid. Getting up at 2:30 a.m. made a shambles of the rest of my day-- even after naps, I'm feeling out of sorts--but it was worth it. That Kris has got one heckuva sexy radio voice! It was great sharing this adventure with you and the rest of AlteredFluid. Getting up at 2:30 a.m. made a shambles of the rest of my day– even after naps, I’m feeling out of sorts–but it was worth it.

That Kris has got one heckuva sexy radio voice!

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